Post by Pride on Jul 24, 2008 21:02:41 GMT -5
Name:
Pride. Formerly, Markus.
Age:
Thousands of years old. Looks around 22.
Gender:
Male.
Race:
Homunculus
Side:
Military/Homunculus.
Official Name:
None.
Rank:
General
Alchemy:
None.
Abilities:
* Usual Homunculus strength, speed, stamina.
*A talented swordsman.
*The Ultimate Eye. Can see attacks before anyone else.
* Invisible
Weapons:
A fencing sword. Always at his right hip.
Other:
The one who looks most like a human, so he infiltrates the military. He has fake life and a fake family.
********************
Relationship Status:
Engaged.
Family:
Celia, Fiance.
Animal Companion:
None.
*******************
Physical Descriptions:
Markus had short, blonde hair that was put in a sideswept hairstyle towards the back of his head. With a few locks of hair in front of his forehead. He had a tall and thin build, with muscles and a healthy air to him. He had small, dark blue eyes with pale skin. He was a charming person, that you would think was the average Amestrian.
After the fire, he got burned severely. His face was all distorted and deformed. His once simple face, now twisted into a face of agony. He gained several scars all around his body, and looked a bit more sensible than before with a softer pink skin tone. His right arm got deformed and he los this right hand. On his left hand, he lost three fingers and he didn't seem to be in great shape.
His Homunculi form is alot like himself before except a bit older. He wears an eyepatch over his left eye, covering his ouroborus mark on his eye.
He isn't usually seen out of his military uniform, but when he is, he is in either really loose clothing, or suits.
Personality:
Markus was always distant to others, and most people called him a social phobic. He knew deep down it was true, but his own mother cared more about other children, rather than him. He turned sour, and become cold and mean to all the children at the orphanage. After that, most people started to hate his demeanor. He tried hard for things he cared deeply about, but he could care less about things he didn't give a damn about. After getting burned, he didn't seem to change at all. But he did, entirely lose his interest in alchemy and becoming a state alchemist. He seemed to not care anymore about anythinng. He started to hate, more and more people.
When he turned into a homunculus, all he wanted was revenge on all humans, except Fabiola. He didn't want to see them all living so happily, a life that he never had. He follows the leader of the homunculi and doesn't care what he has to do, as long as he see's bloodshed towards humans, he will continue to be evil.
Background:
On 1898, January 1st, Markus Jonathan Jenner was born in the Eastern, Coal Mining Town, Youswell. He was the second child of the Jenner family, after his brother Daniel, eight years older than Markus. His family, had a small mansion of their own in the borders of Ishbal, because of the father’s business, terrorism. To hide it, the house was also an orphanage. The mother, a house keeper, who would also take care of the orphans, was an excelent and best complice of Mr. Jenner. His elder brother, Daniel, wouldn’t do much but try to rape small girls running around in the house. As the orphanage was built in 1900, Markus would grow up, surrounded by children, beside what should have been best, his family. Markus never saw his father while he grew up, but got company and love from his mother Rebeca. As Markus learned to he started to explore and learn new things by his own. Interested somewhat in alchemy since the young age of four, and he started to learn about explosive alchemy. The other kids, didn’t like him much, because he didn’t like to play much, his destiny was between sheets of paper full of words and formulas; or rather be playing to be a state alchemist and exploding everything in his way, the way he, at the age of five, found a small girl, near the train rails, and got her home. The girl, named Fabiola Mustang, turned to develop the same interests as Markus, joining him in all his games and studies. Markus, somehow didn’t seem to appreciate her effort, and was mean to her as he was with the other children. At the age of eight, Markus tried to transmute some explosive materials into a bomb, unable to control the transmutation, Markus makes the bomb explode on himself, causing several severe burns in all his body, deforming his face and losing his right hand and the three middle fingers of the other. After almost a year of taking care of his burns, being only nine years old and almost recovering, gets killed by the military, along with his family, and then his body gets burned inside the mansion.
In 1913, Markus was brought to life... as an invisible being. Soul tied to Fabiola, his creator until he finds some red stone and grows in power. He will be capable of change the structure of his body, to go throw things, get visible, hearable, etc. But still, behaving like a naughty nine year old guy. Alternately, he needs to carry out his duty as a homunculus so he gains a physical form when he puts on his special cloth with traces of the Philosophers Stone inside. There forward, he seems like the usual army general, except carrying out Homunculi planning from the inside.
Pride. Formerly, Markus.
Age:
Thousands of years old. Looks around 22.
Gender:
Male.
Race:
Homunculus
Side:
Military/Homunculus.
Official Name:
None.
Rank:
General
Alchemy:
None.
Abilities:
* Usual Homunculus strength, speed, stamina.
*A talented swordsman.
*The Ultimate Eye. Can see attacks before anyone else.
* Invisible
Weapons:
A fencing sword. Always at his right hip.
Other:
The one who looks most like a human, so he infiltrates the military. He has fake life and a fake family.
********************
Relationship Status:
Engaged.
Family:
Celia, Fiance.
Animal Companion:
None.
*******************
Physical Descriptions:
Markus had short, blonde hair that was put in a sideswept hairstyle towards the back of his head. With a few locks of hair in front of his forehead. He had a tall and thin build, with muscles and a healthy air to him. He had small, dark blue eyes with pale skin. He was a charming person, that you would think was the average Amestrian.
After the fire, he got burned severely. His face was all distorted and deformed. His once simple face, now twisted into a face of agony. He gained several scars all around his body, and looked a bit more sensible than before with a softer pink skin tone. His right arm got deformed and he los this right hand. On his left hand, he lost three fingers and he didn't seem to be in great shape.
His Homunculi form is alot like himself before except a bit older. He wears an eyepatch over his left eye, covering his ouroborus mark on his eye.
He isn't usually seen out of his military uniform, but when he is, he is in either really loose clothing, or suits.
Personality:
Markus was always distant to others, and most people called him a social phobic. He knew deep down it was true, but his own mother cared more about other children, rather than him. He turned sour, and become cold and mean to all the children at the orphanage. After that, most people started to hate his demeanor. He tried hard for things he cared deeply about, but he could care less about things he didn't give a damn about. After getting burned, he didn't seem to change at all. But he did, entirely lose his interest in alchemy and becoming a state alchemist. He seemed to not care anymore about anythinng. He started to hate, more and more people.
When he turned into a homunculus, all he wanted was revenge on all humans, except Fabiola. He didn't want to see them all living so happily, a life that he never had. He follows the leader of the homunculi and doesn't care what he has to do, as long as he see's bloodshed towards humans, he will continue to be evil.
Background:
On 1898, January 1st, Markus Jonathan Jenner was born in the Eastern, Coal Mining Town, Youswell. He was the second child of the Jenner family, after his brother Daniel, eight years older than Markus. His family, had a small mansion of their own in the borders of Ishbal, because of the father’s business, terrorism. To hide it, the house was also an orphanage. The mother, a house keeper, who would also take care of the orphans, was an excelent and best complice of Mr. Jenner. His elder brother, Daniel, wouldn’t do much but try to rape small girls running around in the house. As the orphanage was built in 1900, Markus would grow up, surrounded by children, beside what should have been best, his family. Markus never saw his father while he grew up, but got company and love from his mother Rebeca. As Markus learned to he started to explore and learn new things by his own. Interested somewhat in alchemy since the young age of four, and he started to learn about explosive alchemy. The other kids, didn’t like him much, because he didn’t like to play much, his destiny was between sheets of paper full of words and formulas; or rather be playing to be a state alchemist and exploding everything in his way, the way he, at the age of five, found a small girl, near the train rails, and got her home. The girl, named Fabiola Mustang, turned to develop the same interests as Markus, joining him in all his games and studies. Markus, somehow didn’t seem to appreciate her effort, and was mean to her as he was with the other children. At the age of eight, Markus tried to transmute some explosive materials into a bomb, unable to control the transmutation, Markus makes the bomb explode on himself, causing several severe burns in all his body, deforming his face and losing his right hand and the three middle fingers of the other. After almost a year of taking care of his burns, being only nine years old and almost recovering, gets killed by the military, along with his family, and then his body gets burned inside the mansion.
In 1913, Markus was brought to life... as an invisible being. Soul tied to Fabiola, his creator until he finds some red stone and grows in power. He will be capable of change the structure of his body, to go throw things, get visible, hearable, etc. But still, behaving like a naughty nine year old guy. Alternately, he needs to carry out his duty as a homunculus so he gains a physical form when he puts on his special cloth with traces of the Philosophers Stone inside. There forward, he seems like the usual army general, except carrying out Homunculi planning from the inside.
